Friday, June 09, 2006

In Those Moments

In those moments,
quiet and dead,
we see the blood,
in the sand,
on our hands;
when reason dies,
when passion fades,
the dark shows
our lost way;
in bitter and rage,
in anguished dispair,
in tiny pieces,
the slow dying
of a grieving soul.

5 Comments:

Blogger Dagoth said...

Hi Hope

Now this one can make the hair stand up on the back of your neck...

12:15 PM  
Blogger Hope said...

I'll take that as a compliment!

2:49 PM  
Blogger Foxy said...

wow, very powerful.

8:57 PM  
Blogger Dagoth said...

Hi Hope

Thanks for commenting on my blog. You gave me a "Eureka Moment" for the "Description" for my blog that I have been looking for...:)

Of course this was a compliment. Isn't it a poets goal to move people, to have an effect on them, to touch people spiritually. Your poems are very moving...

8:58 PM  
Blogger Hope said...

Thanks guys! Sometimes I feel very certain about my poetry and other times...I'm not so sure!

1:16 PM  

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