Saturday, May 20, 2006

Whole

Lay open my soul, battered and bruised,
tear open my heart, see me undone;
careless the travelers who visited here,
into pieces, careless disregard,
my tears unheeded, feel me shaking,
sifting through the bits that remain;
a faithless dream, a dark confession,
never again will whole I be.

2 Comments:

Blogger Dagoth said...

Hi Hope

careless the travelers who visited here,
into pieces, careless disregard,


Did any of my comments upset you?

6:47 AM  
Blogger Hope said...

Absolutely not!! This was not a commentary on comments on the blog....so no worries!!

5:21 PM  

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